My Brother – The Critic

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My brother has this habit of looking over my shoulder as I write, and critiquing.

This drives me up the wall for the following reasons:

1) He is 13.

2) He uses phrases such as – ‘This doesn’t make sense’ and ‘Do you think this will appeal to a global market?’

3) It is terribly distracting to have someone critique your work AS YOU ARE WRITING IT.

4) He is 13.

5) Though he reads, he is more of a playing football or watching football or playing FIFA kinda guy than a sit down in his room quietly reading kinda guy.

6) He knows it drives me up the wall.

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Oyinkan Braithwaite

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